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zbrown381 |
Tremendous Work
Jul 25 2006, 3:12 PM EDT
Kara, this is fantastic. Thorough, informative, and useful, providing great insight not only into what eMentoring is, but direct links to how to get it set up in one's own school. I have a few points of constructive criticism:
1) The sentence "On this program's website is an excellent list of ways in which eMentoring is implemented in the classroom" actually lacks a subject and technically is a fragment. Consider revising. 2) Are your website citations APA format? You also had a few unnecessary commas, which I took the liberty of deleting. Hope you don't mind! --Zach Do you find this valuable? |
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