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RStingle |
nit-picking
Jul 25 2006, 6:27 PM EDT
Richard, Your page looks good and it seemed like a thorough presentation of the topic, so I don't have too much to say about content. However, I'm a grammar geek so if you don't mind, here are some spelling and grammar issues I noticed:
1) In the "Why use it?" section, I think the word "and" after "asynchronous tool" should be "an." 2) In the "How are teachers using it?", text-base should be "text-based" ; "manly"--> mainly as in "a technology mainly used..." ; and you might want to put a colon before the list of software available at the end of that section. Again, I don't been to be a snob, but I'm studying to be an English teacher so I get picky over this stuff. Do you find this valuable? |
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1. RE: nit-picking
Jul 25 2006, 7:11 PM EDT
Thanks. The sad thing is that I am an English teacher. I guess I have a case of laziness this summer. Thanks for point that out.
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